One day I was going to herd cows up with my papa so we got the four wheelers and loaded them into the truck and went to the mountains when we got on the road I said “ what a good day for herding cows “ and my papa said “ you think “. When we got to the mountains I got out and said “ what a beautiful day “ then my papa said “ let's unload the four wheelers “ . Then we went to go get the cows and we got them but we couldn't find one of the calves there were supposed to be 8 calves but we only had 6 we looked around and I found it and I to my papa “ there over here “ and he said “ climb over the fence " So I did but I got stuck so I pulled but my leg was stuck not my pants so held on to the calves until my papa came and he pushed my leg up slowly then he got the calves then we got on the four wheelers and we went to the truck to get some paper towels a band aid and some water to clean it with that helped Then my papa went back for the cows then we went home and took a nap. Have you ever got stuck in a fence?
No but my uncle did when he was sleding.
ReplyDeleteOuch! I have a couple of suggestions. Remember when you are quoting to capitalize the first letter in the quote. Also when you said "there over there" it should say "They're over there". They're is a conjunction of the words they are. I enjoyed your story!
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