As I got out of my cozzy warm bed I tried not to wake my resting 6 year old brother named Isaac. It was a buitful saturday as I hopped in our gold Honda Acord dad was driving. When we got to the soccer game they were all ready playing. The score was 1 to 0 we were losing. After the half was over the coach talked to us he said. “ We are one of the most feared teams lest go out there and win.” So we went out there and we still didn’t do so well. Five mintues later Colson ,Nessa and I went on ofense I scored 2 goals and had 12 asists. Colson scored 8 goals and Nessa scored 3 goals. The final score3 was 15 to 1. We dominated that team. That was our season ender. But we were happy because won and we had a great record 7 wins and 2 loses.
This was such a great story to read because of the details! You sound smart!
ReplyDeleteGreat job including quotes too. I want to read more of your writing.